![]() Zenitsu as Ponyboy Tanjiro as Johnny Cade Kaigaku as Darry Language: English Words: 1,683 Chapters: 1/1 Hits: 0 (Chapter 3 of The Outsiders rewritten as a demon slayer modern au) Alternate Universe - The Outsiders (S.Kaigaku is Bad at Feelings (Kimetsu no Yaiba).Kaigaku Being an Asshole (Kimetsu no Yaiba).Kaigaku is a Good Sibling (Kimetsu no Yaiba).Kaigakuissilly Fandoms: 鬼滅の刃 | Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba (Anime), 鬼滅の刃 | Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba (Manga), The Outsiders - S. ![]() Request something for me to write, very simple and very straightforward since I'm too stupid to figure out stuff beyond that <33 Language: English Words: 100 Chapters: 1/1 Hits: 0 Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings.Language: English Words: 6,786 Chapters: 3/? Comments: 1 Kudos: 1 Hits: 58įruityGardenTool Fandoms: 文豪ストレイドッグス | Bungou Stray Dogs, ヴァ二タスの手記 - 望月淳 | Vanitas no Carte | The Case Study of Vanitas - Mochizuki Jun (Manga), ヴァニタスの手記 | Vanitas no Carte | The Case Study of Vanitas (Anime), Our Life: Beginnings & Always (Visual Novel), Our Life: Now & Forever (Visual Novel), Royal Alchemist (Video Game), Royal Order (Visual Novel), 憂国のモリアーティ | Yuukoku no Moriarty | Moriarty the Patriot (Manga), 憂国のモリアーティ | Yuukoku no Moriarty | Moriarty the Patriot (Anime), Sally Face (Video Games), 鬼滅の刃 | Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba (Anime), 鬼滅の刃 | Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba (Manga), 天官赐福 | Heaven Official's Blessing (Cartoon), 天官赐福 - 墨香铜臭 | Tiān Guān Cì Fú - Mòxiāng Tóngxiù, How to Train Your Dragon (Movies) There spirits, minds, and bodies will be pushed to the limit as they fight to cure Hilda and save there home. Hilda thought she was spending the summer with her friends but their lives are about to take a dark turn when a demon makes its way into trollberg. Original Demon Slayer Corps Hashira | Pillar Character(s) (Kimetsu no Yaiba).With more careful attention to character development, narrative coherence, and thematic exploration, the story could have been great! Such a disappointment.Darkmaster1003 Fandoms: Hilda (Cartoon), Hilda Series - Luke Pearson & Stephen Davies, 鬼滅の刃 | Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba (Anime) Overall, while I thought that "I Kissed a Succubus" had its moments, particularly in its premise, it ultimately it just failed to engage me. Instead of delving into her internal struggles or motivations, the narrative reduced her to a one-dimensional antagonist, further diminishing the story's potential depth. Miyako's characterization as a manipulative and seductive succubus felt like a missed opportunity to explore the complexities of succubi beyond mere stereotypes. Additionally, the romance between Yukiko and Miyako quickly devolved into toxicity, lacking the depth and emotional resonance that would have made me interested in their romance. Moreover, I hate that these kind of stories always add none-consensual groping and kissing as a joke element. ![]() Yukiko's treatment of Fuu throughout the story was questionable at best, as she seemed to disregard her feelings and engage in behaviors that could be interpreted as deceitful or even cheating. However, the narrative failed to delve deeper into this intriguing premise, ultimately leaving it unexplored.įurthermore, the romantic dynamics between Yukiko, Fuu, and Miyako left much to be desired. The initial setup, with Yukiko's struggle to balance her human desires with her succubus instincts, hinted at a more nuanced exploration of these complexities. One aspect that particularly disappointed me was the portrayal of succubus-human relationships. Moreover, the lack of depth in character development and motivations really made me kind of indifferent. The narrative felt disjointed, perhaps exacerbated by the abrupt ending which left many loose ends untied. For me this is a clear 6 out 10 type of story.įirst and foremost, it's evident that the story attempted to explore various themes and elements, but unfortunately, none of them were executed particularly well. ![]() What did you think? I would really like to hear from someone who actually liked the story. While the premise had potential, the execution fell short in several aspects, leaving much to be desired. I wanted to share my thoughts after reading " I Kissed a Succubus," and I have to admit, it's rare for me to encounter a story that misses the mark on so many levels. Hello wonderful people ☀️ I was wondering if anyone read I Kissed a Succubus?
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